Survived the storm

You were a storm that overtook me
One I can’t believe I survived​
Formed in the middle of nowhere
You took me by shock and surprise 
You were raging passion overwhelming
A seemingly endless whirlwind of chaos
You swept me off my feet
Spun me out, beyond all control
With the force of hurricane winds
I was blindsided when you destroyed me
Too desperate for the thrill of you
To see you were only temporary
Because as quickly as you came
You were gone, damage done
A beautiful storm that left me broken
I still can’t believe I survived.

The original: 

You were a storm that overtook me
One I can't believe I survived
the raging passion, the whirlwind of chaos
you swept me off my feet
​With the force of hurricane winds
​You damaged me with your whims
Blindsided as you destroyed me
Too desperate to feel the thrill
Because as quickly as you came
You were gone and left me broken
I still can't believe I survived. 

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